How To Liven Up Your Secondary Character

   Welcome to the fourth post in my How To Liven Up Your Character series! Click here, here, and here to see the posts that were done before this one. (and do remember that these are just tips, not set-in-stone rules for character building)

   All stories are chock-full of characters. Mentor, leaders, mains, the random person on the other side of the road, the baker in the shop down the street. Even if they don't have names, they're there.
   We've already discussed how to liven up your mentor, leader, and villain characters. And now it's time to discuss another of the most important characters in the story - your secondary characters (which often happen to be some of my top-favorites in stories).
   Samwise Gamgee, Dustfinger, Ronald Weasley, Iko the android. Those are a few of the first secondary characters that pop into my mind - and they're all very good secondary characters.
   So what can you do to liven up your secondary character? 

1. Give them a personality that is the opposite of the main character's, or one that's quirky

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   An example of opposing personalities can be found in Harry Potter and Hermione Granger. Hermione puts a lot of importance on her studies, and always tries to think things through very fully - while Harry doesn't find school that important, and he's a little more brash in his decision making. Their personalities are different, and that definitely keeps things interesting. And then there's Luna Lovegood - another secondary character from the same series, and a very good example of a secondary character with a quirky personality. A lot of people call her Loony Lovegood, because she always has her head in the clouds and believes in many impossible things. She's definitely quirky, and her personality sets her apart from the swarm of other characters in the Harry Potter series - or any other series, actually.
   Maybe your main character is a little too down-to-earth, so your secondary character can be a bit of a Luna Lovegood type - dreamy and head-in-the-clouds. Or maybe your main character is an ISTP, and your secondary character is an ENFJ. Or perhaps your main character is quite content to stay at home with his 'books and garden and armchair' but your secondary character has a huge case of wanderlust. This could cause your main character to get dragged into an adventure, which would also be helping the plot along. Secondary characters are good for lots of things ;).  

2. Create friction with the other characters

   Secondary characters are prime for creating friction with other characters - whether they're villains or not. Put two intelligent creatures in one setting, and you'll probably end up with some friction after a time (either the friction will be between those two characters, or with their surroundings - if you want to get real creative). And friction leads to conflict, and conflict leads to plot.
   Lets take Gollum from the Lord Of The Rings series. He's a secondary character who causes a lot of friction throughout all of the books. He has two personalities - Gollum and Smeagol - and this makes it so that he doesn't just cause problems with other characters, he also causes problems with himself. He's a very good example of a secondary character who creates friction and moves the plot along. 
  Maybe one of your secondary characters tends to mumble when they're distracted, and it drives the other characters nuts. Or maybe they have to pace when they're nervous. Or maybe it's more of a personality thing - maybe your secondary character is really brash in their decision making, while one of your other characters is more apt to think things through.

3. Make sure they have a life and goal of their own

  

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Everyone can tell that the main character has a life (their life is what the story is all about!) - but we have to keep in mind that the secondary character has a life, too.
   I love how this is done in The Hunger Games, in which Gale is one of the secondary characters. Gale is Katniss' best friend in the beginning of the book. But Suzanne Collins makes sure that we know that Gale has a life of his own through his actions (I'm speaking mostly of the first book here) - he can't always do everything Katniss would like him to do, because he has his family to think about. He hates the Capitol, but he can't fight against them as well as Katniss can because of the life he leads. He needs to work to feed his family while Katniss fights. Collins doesn't let us believe that Gale is there just to help Katniss along - a good secondary character will sometimes cause problems for the main character, too. And sometimes Gale has to cause problems for Katniss, because he has to live his own life. And yes, while Gale does have the same goal as Katniss, it makes sense because he led a life similar to her's. 
   Make sure that your secondary character doesn't just go along with everything in the series - they have to have a reason for doing what they're doing. They can't always be helping the main character out - sometimes they'll need to do their own thing. It's important to show your readers that your secondary character is fully fleshed-out, and a fully fleshed-out character will live their own life and have their own goal, too.

 

4. Names

   While this point isn't quite as important as all the rest, I feel that it should still be touched on. Too many stories have been ruined for me by giant casts with names that are a) way too hard to pronounce b) way too similar or c) too unique and complicated. I love crazy character names, but twenty of them in one story? That's a little far.
   Naming a character is normally either very easy, or very hard. Some characters immediately have a name that fits like a glove, and others will keep their name hidden in the dark until you've waded through fire and ice to find it. But you should definitely put some thought into your secondary characters names.
   Does it work well for them? Do you have other characters with names too close to it? Would it be super hard for anyone (other than the author) to pronounce?
   I like to write all of my character's names down - no matter how unimportant they are (some secondary characters are more "major" and some are more "minor") - in the back of my brainstorming notebook, so that I can keep all my ducks in a row ;).

5. Give them a trademark

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I sometimes find characters to be more interesting when they have a "trademark" - either personality wise or otherwise. For example, if you saw anyone wearing a hairstyle like Leia, you would immediately know who they're trying to be.
   Leia's hairstyle is one of her "trademarks". Physical trademarks are cool for all kinds of characters, secondary or not. And then there are personality trademarks - who can think of a secondary character who is loyal almost to a fault? I'd say Samwise Gamgee in a heartbeat. A loyal personality is his "trademark". 
   Iko the android's human-like personality is her "trademark", Hermione's intelligence is her "trademark". And then there's Dustfinger and his fire skills, Mrs. Weasley and her bossy personality, Legolas and his bow - there are tons of "trademarks" in the story world.
   Maybe your secondary character has glasses that always and forever sit crooked on his/her nose. Or maybe they can always be expected to say "let's think about what could go wrong" right when a new idea is brought up. Or perhaps they have a certain possession that they are never seen without?

   Secondary characters can either bog a story down, or keep it going. Make sure that your secondary character doesn't become a lifeless tag-along that's only there to get your main character out of scraps. Give them a life of their own - and give them personality! Don't let people forget your characters, and they won't forget your story, either ;).

~ Savannah Grace

   Does your secondary character have a "trademark"? Who is one of your favorite secondary characters in a story you've read?

#ProjectCanvas: What's Your Writing Passion?

   Most of you who read this blog are probably writers - and most writers probably have a certain aspect of writing that they're especially passionate about. What's your writing passion?

My writing passion is definitely characters.

  I love everything about them, and they make or break a story for me. I think this is half the reason that my standalone novels end up turning into trilogies or series - I'm too attached to the people I've made up, and I know that their story still goes farther.

   I've loved teaching you all what I've learned about characters through my How To Liven Up Your Character series (click here for the latest post), and that's why I knew exactly what topic I wanted to write about when I found out about Project Canvas from Hannah White. I wanted to write about characters (big surprise. xD)

   Project Canvas is, as they state on the website, a collaborative writing project with a vision to create a book full of writing advice and inspiration for fellow writers.  

   Writers from all over the world will be contributing articles for Project Canvas - including myself, Abigayle Ellison, Katie Grace, Hannah White, and many more!

   What's your writing passion? I'd love to hear what your favorite part of storytelling is! And maybe you're interested in sharing what you've learned about writing in an article for Project Canvas - hop on over to their 'topics' page and see what's available ;). 

~ Savannah Grace 

   So, I'm dying to know - what's your writing passion?

Book Review - The Princess And I by Rebekah Eddy

   Who doesn't love a good medieval fantasy now and then? Spec. fiction is my favorite genre, and so when Rebekah was willing to send ARCs of her lovely book to anyone who would review it, I jumped on the chance ;). 

3 1/2 Stars

  
   Anything below three stars (for me, anyways) signifies that a book didn't meet my standards - but this one certainly did! While there were some things that I didn't enjoy so much, there were multiple things that I did! 

   - It reminded me of a Gail Carson Levine book. It seriously did - the pacing, the characters, the medieval setting. Even the plot - while it was original in its own way - made me think along the lines of a Levine book (The Two Princesses Of Barmarre, perhaps?). And I really enjoyed Levine books*, so it was really fun to read something that reminded me of one.

   - Originality. This book, while it did slip into more-cliche things sometimes, held its own very well. There were several things that could have become cliche very fast - but Rebekah managed to keep most things from being so. 

   - The Characters**. At first I was unsure about the main character (which, considering it's me, doesn't mean too terribly much - I may or may not judge characters a little harshly *cringes*), but later on I loved her just as much as all the rest of them. And I was insanely upset about this one thing that happened to this one character at the end of the book - but I can't say because #spoilers xD. 



* no one ever gets too old for fairytales, come on now.
** you guys should have expected it. CHARACTERS ARE MY THING. MY THING, PEOPLE.

   - Some of the emotions weren't entirely realistic. I'm very picky about emotions in books - they need to be realistic, otherwise the book is going to start drifting to the wrong end of the star-spectrum for me*. Luckily though, most of the emotions were still pretty realistic, so the book didn't drift too far. There was still some that I wasn't entirely pleased with, though.     

   - The pacing was a bit fast. For someone else, this might have settled with them just fine, but I wasn't a fan. The latter half felt paced much better, but the first half seemed to be moving a bit quick. A little too quick, in my opinion.   

- It didn't quite hook me from the beginning. Of course I was going to read through the whole thing - I'm reviewing it, after all - but I don't know if I would have continued if it had just been something I had randomly picked up at the library**. That being said, I'm super glad that I agreed to review this because the book just got better and better ;). 



*one star = all the wrath of raging stars (or, ya know, I didn't finish it). two stars = ... less wrath. But you still don't want your book to go there, thank you very much. 
** but library books have to fight hard against all the other books that I actually own which are still on my tbr list. It's a bitter war, you guys. 

   Anyone who loves Gail Carson Levine's writing (or medieval fantasy) should definitely give The Princess And I a chance. It's releasing tomorrow, so make such to check it out on Amazon! Rebekah Eddy did a wonderful job with this book - I'm very glad that I decided to give it a go. I'll probably hand it over to Ariel (who has the best story-telling voice in the family) so that I can hear the adventure read aloud - and so I can get my younger sisters to squeal over it with me ;).    

~ Savannah Grace 

   Have you read anything by Gail Carson Levine? Do you enjoy medieval settings in a book? (also, I'd be much obliged if you guys would take this survey for the new blog design ;))